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So, I know I'm like... six years too late (I'm not entirely sure when this was written, I couldn't find a date) but I recently re-watched Buffy season 7 and have been searching for a fic on what happened during this scene in Chosen. I've found a couple but none of them match up in the slightest to how I see it in my mind. Except this. In all of the ones I've read, they talk and talk and talk and then it's almost always lusty and greedy. That's not how I see it. I see it how you've written it. Thank you so, so much. And I'm sorry to have disturbed you after so long -- you've probably forgotten ever writing this story, but I love it so, thanks a lot. ~Elsa
Adored the last line. Absolutely loved it. It was pure magic.
Jennifer posted on
Dec 22, 2003
Oh, this is absolutely beautiful. You didn't waste a single word, and the quote from "Scarlet's Walk" was just perfect. There is so much sweetness here, and it carries this story from the beginning to the end. Thank you so much for this.