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I feel I owe you an explanation, because I, too, would be saying: wHAT?!? It was an excursion into schmoop, which I don't write. I stick to cool distance, see. And I was all raw and furious after reading JK Rowling's emotion-free death of Sirius, and I thought I'd stretch. I was also half in the bag. :) And the reference of the title refers to a guy in Hindu mythology, who loved a woman so much it redeemed him and made him a saint. Her name was Leyli, and Eric Clapton knew that story and wrote a song called Layla -- and if I have to ammend so many notes I know I have failed as a storyteller, for which I apologize. *g* But hey, it's fanfic. Please gimme a pass on this one, mia hemana. It won't happen again.