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I can't remember if I ever gave you feedback on this or not. Anyway, this was hilarious. Your dialogue is spot-on and just some of the funniest damn stuff I've read. I especially liked this line of Xander's:
“Don’t give me that blank-faced-‘I’ve-got-a-soul-now-and-I’m-just-a-fragile-wounded-man-boy’ routine, okay?"