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Jade Sabre posted on
Aug 15, 2006 | http://www.fanfiction.net/u/452262/ |
Anyway...here's my review, because I very much wanted to leave one, and it basically goes along the lines of
Your porn has purpose, and that's what makes it so good. (That and naked Spikes and Zukos.) It's not just erotica, and it's not OCC sex. There's nothing I hate more than OOC sex. It's sex but there's so much more going on and you explore that. And your descriptions are precise, and you don't try to find six different synonyms for "penis," which is always a plus. And it's IC. (And Spike was naked...and vulnerably insane.) *heartily enjoys*
and I loved loved LOVED the ending--you captured Spike's craziness exactly as it was. Perfectly IC...and Buffy begging for forgiveness...(and why why WHY didn't they at least kiss in season 7? just one kiss. it's all I wanted. That and a hug.).
So...this made the pain of ending Buffy ease, a little. It's very good. Well done.
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Deb posted on
Mar 22, 2003 | Heartbreaking...and wonderful. It needed to be written, to remind us all how hurt *Spike* has been by the past relationship with Buffy...and how heroic he is to risk all he has to keep on loving her in spite of it.
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