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45  elm posted on Feb 24, 2006
Really impressive tale. Outstanding characterization and writing; original plot; amazing fight sequences. Spike's complex and emotional reaction to his former self is intriguing, to say the least. Of course, would love to see this story finished. But if you have no plans to do so, thanks anyway for a great read.
44  SilverUnicorn posted on Jan 30, 2006
This is a very good story. The ending is so emotional. Have you done a sequel? If you have I will be sure to read it (Haven't checked yet.).
43  SlAYeR posted on Jan 28, 2006
its not dun is it???!!!! its totally freekin awsome!!! more more more!!! plz!!!
42  Sianne posted on Jan 10, 2006
Freakin' amazing.
41  Night Owl posted on Oct 31, 2005
insanely awesome... is there a next part?
40  Sian posted on May 18, 2005
I am so disappointed to find that this story hasn't proceeded any further yet. Let me add my pleas to all the others who want to see what happens.
39  carole posted on Feb 7, 2005
please finsih this fic...i tend to stay away from wip's because to many great fics are never finished. nut this one sounded so great i had to start now im hooked. please please write more.
38  caia/thisficklemob posted on Jan 8, 2005 | http://www.geocities.com/caiafic
I am stultified and undone.

Your character voices are excellent. I find myself liking everyone, from Giles and his "vampire counterpart" to Dawn and her crossbow to William and his plucky vulnerability. And I desperately want to know what happens next.

If you posted more of this? It would make me very happy.
37  alexia posted on Dec 31, 2004
i love it.and like someone else said i too am DYING to know what buffy says to spike! You have to rite more!!!!!!!!!!!
36  LizzieLou posted on Oct 9, 2004
Please please please finish this!!!!!!!!!!
Fantastic. Totally gripping. We need to know what happens next!!
35  Annie posted on Oct 8, 2004
This is a really good story. Please carry on with it!
34  Katarzyna posted on Sep 20, 2004
Really liked it. Spike is somebody real and multidimentional, totally different from William and yet they have something keeping them alike. There is a togetherness there. Sort of like one evolving from the other which ( duh! ) would be the case of thr whole vampire bit. Not too sweet but with the "underlay" of feeling, looovely rage and oh so human vulnerability. Cannot say I like somebody pounding a weaker person to a pulp but haven't we all a moment of internal dialogue" shut up shut up SHUT UP OR I WILL BLOODY RAKE YOUR FACE AND GAUGE YOUR EYES OUT AND BREAK YOU IN HALF!!!"
Overall-please more.
33  Sian posted on Jul 14, 2004
More please - I so love William!
32  spike'sgirl posted on Jul 2, 2004
I liked the story plese write more
31  Fiona posted on Jun 22, 2004
I really enjoyed this story, I found the characterisation of Spike refreshing and intriguing, and also felt all the other characters are true to life. The plot idea is interesting and the story is really well-written and leaves me hoping for a continuation.
30  tp posted on Jun 16, 2004
great story. plz! plz! keep writing.
29  Ash posted on Apr 21, 2004
i luv it! i luv it! i luv it! plz plz plz update soon, its so gd! finish this... i wanna c wot Buffy says 2 Spike... plz!? cya
28  alex posted on Apr 18, 2004 | www.allaboutspike.com
i love this story i can't wait for you to finnish it well only if ur goign to write more are you?
27  Kate posted on Jan 18, 2004 | www.geocities.com/spike_lover213/BtVSTCSTH.html
I love this story. You captured Spike and William perfectly. I just have one question. Are you going to write more and if so, when?
26  Cyn posted on Nov 5, 2003
This is *exceptional.* Perhaps there's no hope, but it would be a gift if you continued this. I'm going to rec it to everyone I know. Fantastic work.
25  MikkTorrent posted on Oct 23, 2003
whoa. kick ass story. i mean, really kick ass. you have the british quips and scooby gang talk down perfectly. wonderful stuff, please continue.
24  Brandi posted on Oct 11, 2003
That was amazing story. I found it on rec by AnnieSJ. Truly a beautiful tale, and I love that you ended it where you did.
23  libraflyter posted on Aug 20, 2003
There are several William meets Spike stories out there. This one does it in an interesting and believable way. I'm definitely interested in learning how it turns out.
22  libraflyter posted on Aug 20, 2003
There are several William meets Spike stories out there. This one does it in an interesting and believable way. I'm definitely interested in learning how it turns out.
21  libraflyter posted on Aug 20, 2003
There are several William meets Spike stories out there. This one does it in an interesting and believable way. I'm definitely interested in learning how it turns out.
20  gwendolenau posted on Aug 9, 2003
Your story has a thoroughly intriguing premise and I would love to know what happens next. I also love all your character voices. I hope you haven't abandoned this story.
19  dustyvamp posted on Jul 21, 2003
This story is a really good one that is not found often. I'm really really looking forward to more. You're a great writer!!
18  cori posted on Jul 6, 2003
Just came across this story. Wow! So good! Are you continuing it? So hope so....Actually would love to see Buffy laying a tender lip-smackdown on William as Spike is watching on!!!! Hmmm..
17  Stina posted on Apr 21, 2003
If you have abandoned this story, will you at least come back and mention that so we can stop visiting this page?
16  yvonne posted on Mar 30, 2003
Wow! Now that you have us totally caught up in this story, you have to finish it soon.
Love Spike, love William and even love Xander! That takes some doing.

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