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Brilliant, stunning, lovely. Congratulations, you've made me cry. And your English Football Hooligans dialog - superb.
I love your use of music- and, on a random note, as you seem to love musical irony and whatnot, as I got to the last chapter, my radio began to play *Bye Bye Baby* by the Bay City Rollers... then California Dreaming by the Mommas and the Papas. OI.
Continuing with the compliments- your character voices are rich and individual and strong. I love the bond that survives all kinds of betrayal that you've build here. Additionally, you made me want to punch Xander repeatedly in the face. Thanks for that.
Thanks for this work. It's kept me up late, but it was worth it.