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Lani posted on
May 2, 2012 Great story; funny & engaging. As someone else said, "delicious!" Characterization was spot on, dialogue great. Since one reviewer pointed out a your/you're issue, I'll point out you had at least one its/it's issue (could be a typo, though; I do it myself sometimes... its always means "belonging to it" and it's always means "it is." Loved the story... Spike is so sweet and yet so bad/rude; and Buffy can be quite the bitca, can't she? As I said, the characterization is spot on! Well done!
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camkin posted on
May 18, 2007 Wonderful story! Riley vomiting in the face of his commanding officer...interesting but definitely amusing.
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amane efyra posted on
Jul 3, 2006 oh and the way everyone important stoped at that moment...that was just perfect thats the stuff the other fics miss and of course the witty dialogue not just sex talk
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amane efyra posted on
Jul 3, 2006 i have been reading fan fic for about a week now practically 24/7 and this is the first story i really,really like its almost as if it was really spike and buffy...the dialogue the sarcasm the hot sex and the poetic side make it the best...please make more of these i cant wait ...im begging....big thumbs up...
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jackson posted on
Jan 20, 2006 great story....cant wait for more!
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Anne Hedonia posted on
Oct 16, 2005 | http://annehedonia.populli.net |
Ah. Delicious. Utterly and totally so. I loved the meaning you gave to their bonding. ::big fat happy sigh::
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Anne Hedonia posted on
Oct 16, 2005 | http://annehedonia@populli.net |
Ah. Delicious. Utterly and totally so. I loved the meaning you gave to their bonding. ::big fat happy sigh::
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Erica posted on
Feb 5, 2004 OMG, that was AMAZING...I've never read a fic where you made their joining so meaningful and..whoa. I loved the Western motif and the Miss Buffy/Will Blood, storyline. This HAS to be one of the most amazing stories I've ever read...I loved it. LOVED IT. And I'll be sure to read more of your stories. God, that was amazing....
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Cindi posted on
Dec 9, 2003 Loved this story! I would love to see a sequel!
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Supergirl posted on
Mar 16, 2003 | http://www.midnightmist.net/fiction/authors.php?no=2 |
ch.2--
ok, i lied, i guess i *am* reading it now. good fic is just so addictive, u know? & u write great, so it's very hard 2 put this down (so 2 speak)
anyway, great chapter. spike is so sexy... the whole "want me 2 make u tremble?" thing... mmmmmm. totally made me melt. & i really like how u have buffy subtly starting 2 feel her attraction 2 him without making her all over-heels in love, in a very unrealistic way, like some stories. what u have her feeling for spike here is very believable, & i think it's quite true 2 character, 4 the timeframe this is set in
oh, &, this kinda sleepy, smoky feel the whole story has... i really like that too
great work. off 2 ge read some more now
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Supergirl posted on
Mar 16, 2003 | http://www.midnightmist.net/fiction/authors.php?no=2 |
ch.1--
very nice start. looks like this could b quite a good story. i also enjoyed the visual of all the scoobies dressed up... & western spike is very sexy. & i love when he's all noble like that, despite claiming that he's evil & doesn't care about buffy & her friends
the only thing i'd criticize is 1 typo i noticed, where u wrote "you're" instead of "your" in "You're concern is right touchin', pet". but everything is nearly perfect
anyway, i'm not gonna read it all now, but i'm bookmarking this story & i promise 2 read & review the rest of it later
by the way, if u'd like 2 check out some of my fic (at the above link), i'd very much appreciate it
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