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Séverine posted on
Oct 18, 2005 That was so lovely ! Thank you so much for sharing.
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Jessi posted on
Sep 23, 2005 This story is perfect! I promise, the voices are absolutely perfect, especially Illyria! I love her in this story! The use of "slow motion" was very well-done, not too much, and their reactions to each other after so long were exactly as I would have expected them! Please please write a sequel!!! :)
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Lessie posted on
Sep 14, 2005 Sequel?
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Danna posted on
Jun 10, 2005 Perfect!! This was a wonderful read. I love the outcome of the battle with the dragon and how Spike takes care of Ilyria. The characters were so well written. Please write a sequel!!!
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Lyssa posted on
Apr 16, 2005 Loved this! The characters were so perfect! Thier voices and actions were so dead on it was amazing. Did you ever write a sequel? Cause if you did I really want to read it!
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Sam Finn posted on
Mar 26, 2005 I really liked your character voices. Illyria was spot on. I had terrific visuals of everyone. I did miss the part between sitting on the sofa and then lying in bed - would be nice to picture that kiss that led from one place to another. Overall your writing is excellent and very enjoyable.
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~ Lynne C. ~ posted on
Mar 8, 2005 | http://www.geocities.com/fic_girl_2003/index.html |
Now, that was really beautiful. Well written, and not with their feelings and motivations all simplified out. They are both as complex as they always were...nice. And, can I just say, EXCELLENT use of Illyria. Funny and sad, just as she should be!
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babe posted on
Feb 25, 2005 loved it. glad the dragon didn't kill angel. also pleased that spike didn't just jump at buffy's suggestion of moving in together, but please write a sequal where they finaly decide that slow motion is now not fast enough !
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Amanda posted on
Jan 29, 2005 oh my god, makes me want to petition to bring the show back and have this girl write for the show, please have a sequel...
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debbicles posted on
Jan 26, 2005 Loved Illyria. Can we have a sequel, please? This was just right. Thank you.
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Me.. posted on
Jan 7, 2005 I love it. Really perfect. Just how I could imagine "the end" of Buffy & Spike.
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LizzieLou posted on
Dec 7, 2004 WhyohWhy could this have not happened for real! This was so well written Cindy, that it just made me wish so much that the show had not been cancelled and this was an episode we would ALL have looked forward to. Bloody great stuff.Thank you.
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Maia posted on
Nov 28, 2004 I've just read it!...and it couldn't be more perfect!...I really liked the fact that she already knew he was alive but didn't jump into his arms though. That's truly "Buffy", she would never admit at once her feelings. And the whole moment in bed...absolutely beatiful!!.
It was good he didn't leave with her...
CONGRATULATIONS TO THE WRITER/S!!!
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Kit posted on
Sep 2, 2004 Lovely, my dear. One of the most true and heartfelt pieces I've read in a long time. "I loved Angel too much, Riley too little, and you too late." That was perfect, absolutely perfect. You have a talent, honey. Thank you for sharing it.
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kait posted on
Aug 31, 2004 An absolute perfect ending. This is the best story I've read about the ending of the two most incredible shows the WB or UPN will ever have!
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Sandra posted on
Aug 10, 2004 Brava!!! I didn't want it to end. Tender, and true to their characters. It's the storyline I had hoped for if there had been another season. I must have more!!! Congratulations big time.
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Estepheia posted on
Aug 10, 2004 | www.estepheia.com |
Excellent!
I love the Illyria voice - and the way you are true to the characters. Nice use of the slow motion metaphor!
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Carter posted on
Aug 4, 2004 Cindy, this is "Season Six" material babe. I mean, this is the tightest shit I have ever read from an independant writer. It does kinda make me a little sad... and very angry that those fools at the WB canceled that show. Angry too at all the other networks that didnt care to pick the show up. But I digress... great story Cindy, and I would love to read more.
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Carter posted on
Aug 4, 2004 Cindy, this is "Season Six" material babe. I mean, this is the tightest shit I have ever read from an independant writer. It does kinda make me a little sad... and very angry that those fools at the WB canceled that show. Angry too at all the other networks that didnt care to pick the show up. But I digress... great story Cindy, and I would love to read more.
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kathy posted on
Aug 1, 2004 This is a beautifull little story, and quite honestly, exactly how I hoped their future relationship would unfold. These two need some time for themselves to grow and discover who they really are. A love like Spike and Buffy have will never fade, it can only grow, and I think Spike is showing some tremendous maturity at this point. He has become his own man, and is determined to make something of that. He knows he needs and wants her in his life, and is secure with her love for him. Something tells me, these two will not be apart very long. And the absense will only make the heart grow fonder....right? Look out when they get back together. Can we get a sequel???????
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Marianne posted on
Jul 31, 2004 I liked the slow way this built up to a steamy end - and I liked the fact that Spike didn't just drop everything to go with Buffy. Great stuff.
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lena posted on
Jul 30, 2004 Illyria was my favorite part of this fic.well done.
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Bri posted on
Jul 29, 2004 This was such a good story it is unbelievable. You know the characters and the story so well. I have seen every Buffy and Angel episode a million times and I still couldn't write like this. I like how they get together but you leave Spike available to do maybe another series or movie without Buffy.
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auroramama posted on
Jul 29, 2004 Very nice. I loved Illyria, especially her reactions to the Spike and Buffy Show in a Box. And, yeah, I never had any trouble with Spike not wanting to find out what Buffy felt about him now that he was alive. Tough act to follow, saving the world *and* discreetly snuffing it so as not to encumber the beloved. And I love the awkward sofaness and how it clashes with their fantasies. They're both mush-headed romantics really; they just never manage to wind up in that place together for long.
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Elisabeth posted on
Jul 29, 2004 Oh, I adored this. Possibly the loveliest post-'Not Fade Away' story I've read. Illyria was perfect - basically I think I want to repeat everything Brunettepet said. Also opens up a realistic future. Thank you.
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Brunettepet posted on
Jul 29, 2004 That was just wonderful. The last demon coming over the dragon, Angel - wow. Your Illyria grieving and being frustrated by it and needing to surround herself with his possessions, a lovely segue for Buffy and Spike opening up. I love that they are still on a journey toward each other, life is messy that way. Beautiful story, emotionally true and hopeful.
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Dianna posted on
Jul 28, 2004 "I loved Angel too much, Riley too little, and you too late."
What a wonderful summation.
Beautiful story. Thanks.
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liz posted on
Jul 27, 2004 | thanks so much...it's so funny recently I've really felt the need to heal that ATS520 proposal...like it has been sitting in my heart like poison...and your story helped me so much. There is an arc, a deeper nature of love that only time and stress can help facilitate. Buffy & Spike are perfect pioneers for this truer love...and to see them continue this journey satisfiys something few other stock relationships can in the year 2004. We need to see their success. Because love is merciful and rewards great, great effort and humilty. Thus is the social relevance of fanfic and B/S. Thanks so much you got it just right.
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